Anya says: "A lit bit weird pose, but for the first time I enjoyed colouring in photoshop as I mastered the "BLUR" tool! *insert evil laugh here*
The Oracle says : "Tesunii - is a female youma under the control of Nephrite in episode 14. Her mission is to gather the energy of tennis player Rui Saionji once Rui reached her peak energy. Nephrite disguised himself as a tennis coach named Masato Sanjoin and put his evil crest on Rui's tennis racket, thus planting Tesunii inside. Once Rui reached her peak energy, Tesunii emerged from the racket and drained the girl's energy."
Description was taken from The Oracle Web Site ->> [link]
It is not the pose. The pose is good, looks like she is serving. I think it is the jumpsuit that is throwing things off. Trying rounding her right thigh down a little and add strings to the "racket". I really love your work and I hope you are not mad at my comment.
Cool stuff. The shading on the navy blue suit thing works well. I'm less sure about the red bit: from the outline it looks like it's supposed to be feathery, but the shading doesn't match that. Something to consider, maybe.
On a non-art related note: fiery tennis rackets. Oh dear oh dear oh dear...
The trick of those characters-monsters is that I never know what is the material..and to be honest I didn't figure how to make feathery brush strokes...help?
I guess the simplest thing to do is take what you have there and lay a number of soft, thin brush strokes (darker, or maybe a mix of dark and light) over the area. That might look more furry than feathery, but I guess either works
Is it the pose that is weird?
I love it more when people leave such comments - without them I wouldn't know what to improve = )
On a non-art related note: fiery tennis rackets. Oh dear oh dear oh dear...